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megwrites ([personal profile] megwrites) wrote2010-03-26 11:24 am
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Genre Talk: Urban Fantasy

I've been trying to make this post for, like, a week now. I keep deleting it and re-writing it because I haven't felt I've really articulated my opinions as well as I want to.

But I think I've gotten close with this post.

I read and write urban fantasy. The draft I'm trying to get through at the moment is urban fantasy (complete with vampires!). But if any of you have followed my reviews, you'll see that I'm often quite critical and very harsh on urban fantasy/paranormal romance novels. Moreso perhaps than I am on any other genre of books, even science-fiction or straight up fantasy.

When I go into a bookstore or browse online booksellers, the selections I see disappoint me greatly, and I'm frustrated by the current output in urban fantasy/paranormal romance. I firmly believe in Sturgeon's Law (99% of everything is crap), and that goes for books. So there is no genre that is either completely perfect or completely terrible. But right now, as it stands, the UF/PR genre seems to have a higher-than-normal proportion of shitty books.



There's no reason I can think of (outside of marketing and publishing realities) why this should be so. I, as a reader, am desperately hungry to find the kind of tales that this genre could be telling. I am ravenous for tales of the magic and mundane swirling together, showing how ordinary the not-ordinary is, how much is unseen even when we look straight at it. I long for stories of secrets places where there might just be a ghost on the subway or a goddess stuck in traffic. I want to read of unlikely heroes, of people who's greatest magic is not a spell or amulet or super strength, but the abliity to twist and turn and shape themselves around whatever is strange and dangerous and true.

As for paranormal romance? It's like that kid who you know is a genius, but they just won't do their homework so they get D's when they could be acing the class. I am so ready for that really great story about what it would really be like to love someone who is sometimes a wolf or drinks blood and can't touch daylight. I'm ready for someone to show me how amazing it is when love - which is its own super power - can put people together against steep odds. I want to see how you'd make it work with a vampire or a witch or a demon, and why they'd fall in love with a human. Why a human - a smart human with actual self-esteem - would fall in love with them.

I'm ready for an attraction between the magic and the mundane that transcends the "well, he's basically a blood-drinking Abercrombie model and she's wearing leather pants, ta da, it's true love!" I want to read the stories about people who thought they were done with love or couldn't/wouldn't be loved. I want to hear the tales of how sometimes, in the midsts of the worst places, people find and create something spectacular.

Urban Fantasy and Paranormal Romance have some lofty literary parentage. They borrow from SF and Romance, respectively, though you can find dashes of noir and detective fiction and mystery in the mix, the way a kid might have their's uncle's nose or their grandmother's smile.

Romance is a lot of live up to, because some of the greatest cultural works we have stem from that genre. It's something that has permeated into our TV shows, movies, songs. The tales this genre comes out with are important ones. It's also a genre where women writers can stake a claim the way they often can't in other places. In this genre get to talk about life, about love, about how it works (or doesn't), how it hurts, how it isn't easy, and how sometimes life really is exciting. How individual human being spark and shock and fight and fuck and exist so beautifully sometimes even when the rest of the world is ugly. Romance is where we talk about the things that make life worth living. What makes all the boring bits worth it.

Fantasy is all about inventing new things, shining light into dark corners, inventing the place that aren't but making you, the reader, feel as though they're as real as the book in your hands. Fantasy lets us talk about things we can't say openly, it lets us parse our world through alternatives and contrasts and opposites. We can define and even shape what is by talking about what isn't (yet), what can't be, what shouldn't be, what should be.

But these are not the stories being told, these are not what I see when I browse shelves and websites.

What I see staring back at me is a sea of sameness. I see, over and over again, just one tale being told. I see covers that show only one image: the cutoff image of a thin, white, cisgendered, able-bodied, twenty-something woman's body. Her skin is meant to tantalize me somehow, as though it is beaconing me to see what I could imagine myself to be, because of course to be thin, able, white, and twenty is the ideal, this is the body women ought to have when talking about themselves as powerful and free and liberated. Who would want to be PoC, after all? Or disabled? Or fat? Or fifty? What woman in her right mind would see a body of color or a disabled body or a fat body or a transwoman's body an old body and think, "This is a powerful, free body? This is the body of a warrior, a heroine, a person with a tale worth telling?"

I tell myself, "Cover art isn't everything." I think of the examples of bad covers on good books (think Justine Larbalestier's "Liar" or Jaclyn Dolamore's "Magic Under Glass").

Then I open the books, and I find that the covers are not so inaccurate. The tale told to me seems always the same, always a disappointment. The story is told in the first person by the same self-absorbed, conventionally attractive, twenty-something, blandly heterosexual, aggressively cisgendered, emotionally needy white woman. I am expected, as a reader, to sympathize with her because of her shoes or her clothes, of which she speaks often and sometimes at length, never mind if such clothing is usually not made for my body or that I may not even be able to afford such things. Because I identify female and so does she, it is expected that her material possessions will elicit a bond between us.

I am then expected to relate to her ill-considered attraction to an equally conventional, aggressively heterosexual man who's body matches her in it's dominance-affirming perfection. His scars, like hers, are never deforming. I am not supposed to question his actions too much, whether following her home makes him a stalker rather than a lover, whether an immortal creature repeating high school endlessly is not creepy rather than charming. It is my fault as a reader if I examine and analyze this relationship too close, asking rude questions and wondering why they're together or why their relationship - the meeting of two perfect, white, straight, thin, attractive bodies - should matter to this fat reader. Obviously, thin white bodies are of interest to everyone, whatever their size, color, orientation, or ability.

The story told to me winds around, a barely functioning plot that reads like a weakly written episode of a detective show with a witch or a vampire or werewolf thrown in. The heroine's adventure takes usually a week or less and is paced too quickly to be believable, all the while she makes crack and quips designed to be witty but which are never really funny. Clue after obvious clue is laid down, leading to a cardboard villian who seeks to destroy the world or kill the heroine for reasons that are as thin and flimsy as the shirts she wears on the cover. During this plot many friends and allies and even rival suitors appear to woo her, help her, lay down their lives for her cause as though they have none of their own, no lives or responsibilities that might cause them to prioritize other things or themselves above this perfect, enchanted white woman. These minor characters (many of them only PoC, GLBT, PWD, or fat people to be found) are merely smaller bodies that rotate around the gravity well of the heroine, who is more important than all else.

After a scrambling, clumsy battle at the end, the heroine has accomplished her goal and come out intact. She is never killed, never loses a limb, never scarred, never left damaged. She and the Love Interest are closer but here is room left for a sequel so it isn't a perfect "Happily After Ever" and there the tale ends.

I am told by reviewers and book blurbs that these are supposed to be fun stories, that they're supposed to be "sexy", "fun", "wild", "hot", "sizzling", and I wonder - to whom? What if you're bisexual (I am), lesbian, gay, or otherwise queer-identifying? If the story of perfect woman-on-perfect man doesn't excite you, what is the purpose of this book?

And then I wonder where the books for the rest of us are. Where are the urban fantasies and paranormal romances for PoC, PWD, fat people, GLBT folks, or those of us who just want something different, something else? Where are the urban fantasies and paranormal romances for those who have nothing to do with and are nothing like the sea of perfectly sculpted whiteness in front of them?

I know this isn't just the fault of authors writing these things. I know there are a long line of agents, editors, publishers, and marketing professionals who push the material, who push the suspicion that nothing else will sell, who take the giant pool of submissions and select only these things, who press authors to twist around their material. There is no one person to blame, just one terrible system that keeps telling and transmitting this same story. Whether it is profitable for the writers, publishers, editors, and agents involved, it leaves me, the reader, feeling very lonely and disappointed and longing for something more, something else, something different, something better.

[identity profile] handyhunter.livejournal.com 2010-03-27 08:08 am (UTC)(link)
"Guardian of the Dead" just arrived on my doorstep today! ♥ I'll be sure to check out the other recs too!

As though a woman needs the extra strength just to match up.

Oh, totally. That is one of the more troubling themes of this genre. I wouldn't mind seeing books with ordinary heroes having to live in a supernatural world, as long as it didn't feed into gender(ed) stereotypes. There must way for a non-super-powered person or PWD (who doesn't have Professor Xavier's psychic abilities) to contribute to the saving of the world or themselves without always having to rely on someone else. Which isn't to say having friends or a team is a bad idea -- I like a good ensemble too, but I think that's a rather different dynamic than the 'damsel in distress' or 'too stupid to live' character type.

I was having a conversation with someone else about power fantasies and how they feel like lies, sometimes. I think this maybe happens if, as you said, it seems like the only way to create a level playing field is for women to be super-powered -- which are the stories that get told a lot, especially in the PR/UF genre.

Ironically, one of the initial draws to Twilight, for me, was the ordinary narrator in Bella and Meyer's sparklepires choosing to do good without the aid of a curse. It didn't quite go the way I hoped it would, but I found it to be an intriguing and somewhat different premise. I think Meyer's execution was faulty, in no small part because she kept setting up circumstances in which Bella makes choices that lead her to be saved by Edward. I'd like to think it's possible to have a regular person (woman, especially, because I like my female main characters) in a supernatural world without requiring them to be saved -- or at least without it being so sexist and other types of problematic. Two female leads, maybe? Or have the supernatural guy NOT be a controlling stalker?

Have you seen [livejournal.com profile] bookshop on Bad Romance (or, YA & Rape Culture) (http://bookshop.livejournal.com/1032547.html)? I think it applies to the romance genres too.
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[identity profile] handyhunter.livejournal.com 2010-03-27 08:18 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, also, because I love this (mystery) series so much: Kate Shugak is tiny and not superpowered, so she often has to rely on her wits to take down the bad guys, especially if there's a lot of them or they are bigger than she is. She can use a gun and knows how to fight, but doesn't go rushing into them when there are other, smarter options. And she's partners with a half-wolf, who respects and listens to her. (I also like that she's the emotionally damaged/closed off one with the tragic past that made her the hardened PI she is today, and Jack, her significant other, is more emotionally stable and not very angsty.)
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[personal profile] littlebutfierce 2010-03-27 09:03 am (UTC)(link)
I have some... issues... w/Patricia Briggs, but one of the things I like about her Mercy Thompson books is that Mercy is a mechanic & frequently worried about money, & IIRC at some points in the books some potential shapeshifter/vampire adventure will come up & she'll be like, "Dammit, I can't AFFORD to shut the garage & go traipsing off for 3 days w/o working!"

[identity profile] baka-kit.livejournal.com 2010-03-27 10:25 am (UTC)(link)
I love you!

This is what I'm working with, what I'm trying to do. Why I changed City of Sun and Darkness from first person to third. (And that was an education; stripped of the I and me, Shannon was boring.)

It's still not perfect and I don't think it could be. Shannon's still white and 22 and I can't make myself think of size 16 as fat no matter how many times the fashion industry tells me it is. But she dresses modestly and generally unobtrusively and has no tattoos because she's Jewish (even if she doesn't keep Kosher because she likes her Big Macs too much).

But anyway.

Rewriting it into third person -- taking Shannon out of the center of the universe -- is making the story a lot stronger. It's not just Shannon moving the plot, it's this orrey of intersecting plot-orbits and how they all interact with each other.

[identity profile] baka-kit.livejournal.com 2010-03-27 10:28 am (UTC)(link)
but the heroine is bipolar

Having just been diagnosed, that sounds like something I'd like to read!

[identity profile] fiction-theory.livejournal.com 2010-03-27 11:38 am (UTC)(link)
Yay! Let me know if you ever need a beta reader! I'd love to see what you come up wit! :)

[identity profile] fiction-theory.livejournal.com 2010-03-27 11:53 am (UTC)(link)
Personally I'd like to see more MMCs who are also different.

I would as well, especially if it's an MMC who is, say, of color, PWD, GLBT (well, minus the L) or what not. I think that one thing I get annoyed with is that a lot of female characters feel like the author just projecting themselves, but not any particularly interesting or deep part. And while that might be fun for the author, it's certainly not fun for the reader. Also, I don't want a genre that puts out any "Girls Only" or "Boys Only" signs.

this kinda makes me want to go back to my UF, in which I mess around with a lot of the "conventional" tropes and stereotypes of the subgenre.

DO IT! DO IIIIIIIIIIT! DO IT DO IT DO IT! We so badly need this type of writing that it isn't even funny. You should so totally do it.

I find it funny that you've got a secondary world to focus on before you finish and maybe do some UF. I've got some UF to finish before I move on to a secondary world fantasy that I'm going to work on next. Oh, the ironing!

[identity profile] fiction-theory.livejournal.com 2010-03-27 12:02 pm (UTC)(link)
This. You also reminded me that often times these heroines are frequently able to afford or in the very least covet (from the perspective of potentially one day owning) x brand of stilettos, or some other material object, and that this classist bias is consistent throughout the genre.

Yes, yes, yes, this. I hadn't considered that, but it is something that is completely true. And it's also completely annoying because it's a very subtle sign that not all readers should feel welcome or able to relate to a heroine in that text, because it's a way of flaunting wealth or at least class status, and there's no need for that.

Also, why are all vampires very rich? No one ever explains what it is that these vampires do to cultivate such wealth that they live in mansions and can do as they please. Don't vampires need jobs, too?

I saw the post, btw. Great post! When I get around to getting over to DW (I'm still trying to hammer out my layout over there), I am so subscribing! :)

[identity profile] fiction-theory.livejournal.com 2010-03-27 12:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, you'd think that more authors would understand this, because let's face it. Out of the thousands of us that even get published to begin with, a grand total of about ten (ie - JK Rowling, Stephen King) actually get rich. The rest of us have to keep our day jobs.

I haven't read the Mercy Thompson series yet, do you recommend it? Also, what issues do you have with Briggs? (I like to know these things ahead of time)!

[identity profile] fiction-theory.livejournal.com 2010-03-27 01:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, the thing is, I have nothing inherently against a white/twenty-something female main lead. After all, such folks do exist and it sounds like you're doing a good job of rounding out the character and of adding some actual culture and history behind her.

I find a lot of the protagonists in UF have no culture because apparently being white means you're acultural, that you're not an ethnic group, that you're "normal" and everyone else is "ethnic".

Do you mind if I voice a slight hestitation I had when I read your description? I say this this is as a fat person, and I understand that descriptions can be completely deceiving and maybe it reads different in your draft. But (there's always a but). When I see a fat/overweight/larger-sized character that is portrayed to love a certain food that is considered a "junk" or "bad" food, I often wince because it's a landmine for us larger folks, especially fat women or fat women who are of color, disabled, etc - because society increasingly polices your body as intersectionality comes into play.

One thing that fat people are often accused of is being fat simply because all they do is eat huge, gluttonous, unhealthy meals and don't exercise. When we go out to restaurants, people make comments on what we eat. I've had this happen. People feel that their job is to concern-troll my nutritional needs.

Thing is? I eat a 1200 calorie diet and walk/jog 4 miles every morning. Haven't lost that much weight (but have drastically improved my health), but because of my size, people assume I sit home eating big macs all day and watching day time TV. Even when I don't.

Again, it depends on how you write it and how it's laid out in the book. But that was just my initial reservation when seeing that part.

That said, it sounds like a really fascinating book and I'd love to read it some day.

[identity profile] mercwriter.livejournal.com 2010-03-27 05:27 pm (UTC)(link)
I wish I could focus on more than one world (novel-wise) at a time, sigh. I'm better at juggling short stories than I am novels. ;)

Although the SW fantasy has a PoC main character and the bulk of the cast is some shade of GLB. I take my same demands for secondary world fantasy into consideration when writing, and I want more variety. It's been way too much fun so far.

Oh! I remember now--I haven't read it yet but an UF I really want to get my hands on is KING MAKER (http://www.amazon.com/King-Maker-Knights-Breton-Court/dp/0007343310/ref=sr_1_2?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1269710688&sr=8-2) by Maurice Broaddus.

[identity profile] handyhunter.livejournal.com 2010-03-27 06:24 pm (UTC)(link)
I think maybe it's part of the 'fantasy' aspect to not have to worry about money? It's why so many heroes, vampire or otherwise, are rich too, even if the writer hasn't explained how a vampire, for example, managed to accumulate his wealth.
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[personal profile] littlebutfierce 2010-03-27 08:32 pm (UTC)(link)
There's a rape in the third book that... well, it seems a bit squickily handled in how the survivor gets over it (it seems to happen a bit fast--although I know not every survivor reacts the same way, etc.--especially, iirc, w/the help of the romantic interest). I remember seeing quite a lot of blog posts that took issue w/that.

I wouldn't recommend them overall--I mean, I enjoy them to a degree (I caved & read the fourth book b/c I got a galley), but... there's a lot of the usual annoying stuff: sexy dominating male shapeshifters (at one point Mercy is told she has to choose between two b/c OTHERWISE IT WILL TEAR THE PACK APART), blah blah. Mercy is mixed-race but I felt like that got exoticized a fair amount.
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[personal profile] manifesta (from livejournal.com) 2010-03-28 02:55 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! :)

I think you'll like DW. Compared to LJ, and partly because it's currently a small community, the atmosphere seems to be more welcoming to people who don't identify with traditional norms (as well as those who do but also actively attempt to deconstruct their own privileges).

[identity profile] baka-kit.livejournal.com 2010-03-28 10:21 am (UTC)(link)
I'm sorry; I didn't mean to imply that Shannon's weight was a result of her Big Mac habit. More that I don't see her as having a weight problem. Size 16 is the size I want to be; I'm actually in the 20/22 range.

Thank you for pointing it out, though. It's a helpful reminder that what's clear and obvious in my head is often not so much so on the page.
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[identity profile] kitrona.livejournal.com 2010-03-28 10:28 am (UTC)(link)
Out of curiosity, how do you feel about Butcher's Dresden Files? I'm currently reading them, and I find them intriguing because a. Harry worries about money, b. his love interest is actually somewhat realistic, c. during the adventures, he actually GETS TIRED (which I've found missing in some UF), and d. he does things for stupid but noble reasons, but he KNOWS they're stupid.

Another good series I've found, though it still doesn't address the lack of diversity re: sexual orientation and skin color, is Seanan McGuire's Toby Daye series. The pacing is frenetic, but Toby is likable, wears sensible shoes, gets tired, makes mistakes... I just generally really enjoy them, though of course nothing is without flaws.

Also, thank you for this entry. I plan to read it again when I'm actually awake, and definitely plan to go through the comments for book recs. :)

[identity profile] fiction-theory.livejournal.com 2010-03-28 12:06 pm (UTC)(link)
More that I don't see her as having a weight problem. Size 16 is the size I want to be; I'm actually in the 20/22 range.

See, this is why I made sure to add the caveat that it all depends on how you play it out in the novel. Because if you come from the angle that her weight isn't a problem at all, that changes up the dynamics of it a LOT. And that's a dynamic that makes me far less queasy and far more eager to read.

Funny enough, we're the same size! I'm a US 20/22 range. It boggles me the sizes at which women get called fat. Crystal Renn is a size 12 and she gets called "plus size". I can't even express what I would give, sometimes, to be a size 12 - if only so that I wouldn't have decide whether or not I want to fly on an airplane (I am so afraid of being kicked off a flight like Kevin Smith was) or I could go to a doctor and not have the first/only conversation about my health amount to, "You need to lose weight".

Thank you for pointing it out, though. It's a helpful reminder that what's clear and obvious in my head is often not so much so on the page.

Yeah, and I hope I didn't make you feel defensive or put on your heels (so to speak) because a two line summary isn't nearly enough to get the feel of a piece.

But yeah, I know. As a fellow fat person? I know that it's very hard to write about and talk about fat characters without giving into the stereotypes and lies we've been told all our lives, without painting society's food policing and concern-trolling all over it.

There are not nearly enough fat characters in this genre, and I'm glad to hear about you writing one. I definitely would love to see this (and if you ever want/need a beta reader, just say the word!) and see how this character and her story turn out.

[identity profile] fiction-theory.livejournal.com 2010-03-28 12:18 pm (UTC)(link)
I reviewed the first Dresden book, "Storm Front (http://fiction-theory.livejournal.com/145640.html#cutid1) last year. It wasn't the best thing I'd ever read, but not the worst. My husband liked the series more than I did and he's read almost all the books (which he got from his brother. I married into a family of geeks and it's GORGEOUS).

I did note the things you mentioned, especially that his first person narration is, like, 60% less grating than most UF books, so there's that. I think I was a bit spoiled for the books by the TV show because I really loved the TV show.

I'm glad you liked the post! And definitely check those recs. Healey's Guardian of the Dead has now found a place on my "Run, Don't Walk To Find This" list, and I'm definitely going to try to find Kiernan's "Murder of Angels" at my first opportunity.

One thing I really love about posts like this is that it gives us a chance to not just talk about what flops, but about the gems we've found along the way and share that information with others.
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[identity profile] kitrona.livejournal.com 2010-03-28 01:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah, I never saw the show. (TV issues.) How close is it to the books? Or rather, should I bother hunting it down? :)

There's a long-term story arc about him falling in love and how complicated it gets, but it's very much secondary to the other story arcs, which is nice.

I love this post, and posts similar to it! But now I must crash so I can be useful later. :)

[identity profile] zahrawithaz.livejournal.com 2010-03-29 04:58 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm not particularly familiar with urban fantasy or paranormal romance (though I think I read a lot of books that are on the edge of or maybe in the genre), but I wanted to let you know how much I appreciated this post, and the comments, which are utterly full of win. I think a lot of what you have to say applies to other genres, especially those that are somehow built or premised on escapism, and the flattening of all of us to this one white/cis/owner-class/straight/thin norm in this context is very disturbing.

[identity profile] zahrawithaz.livejournal.com 2010-03-29 04:59 pm (UTC)(link)
PS. Forget to say, here via glassicarus's rec.

[identity profile] glass-icarus.livejournal.com 2010-03-29 05:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Here via the flist, and... yeah. I'm not as into urban fantasy as I am SF/F, but you've nailed the exact things that have kept me from jumping in wholeheartedly. (Which, admittedly, are true for SF/F as well, except that I'd already taken the leap for those.)

Here via glass_icarus

[identity profile] ruffwriter.livejournal.com 2010-03-30 03:12 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much for this. ♥ I'm an unpublished writer currently shopping my urban fantasy story to agents, and if there's one thing I learned, it's that on an agent's submission guidelines, they'll say they're looking for "urban fantasy" and they actually mean "paranormal romance between two self-absorbed Abercrombie and Fitch models."

But your post reminded me of what great potential the genre has, and as you said, how fascinating stories are when they explore "how sometimes, in the midsts of the worst places, people find and create something spectacular." Here's hoping for a different, wildly popular book that will open the floodgates for all the other voices we've been craving.

[identity profile] handyhunter.livejournal.com 2010-04-01 11:23 am (UTC)(link)
"Guardian of the Dead" definitely lives up to what people have been saying about it! It is so very very good and atypical of the YA/urban fantasy genre -- it starts off with some familiar tropes and then subverts them in awesome ways (including the 'strong female character' type!) and keeps getting better from there. <3

[identity profile] fiction-theory.livejournal.com 2010-04-01 03:47 pm (UTC)(link)
EEEEEE! I'm really glad to hear that and I am so totally going to make sure I get my hands on this book pronto. Yay! Trope subversion!

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