ext_320497 ([identity profile] scififanatic.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] megwrites 2008-05-21 02:12 am (UTC)

I do this too. One of my writer friends calls them "filters" that put a block between the reader and the character (or the writer and the character). They're easy to fix though! As you said, it's a matter of committing to what your characters experience in that moment. My filters tend to be "it felt" or "seemed like."

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