Victory = sweet.

I have now officially completed all rewrites and revisions for the Tower!Guy novel. From prologue to epilogue, the thing is now polished as much as it can possibly be polished.

I have only a last line edit, to check for spelling, grammar, and other technical errors left. Then query letters and synopses, and then the part where I send out for my Rejection Letter Starter Kit. Yay!

I'm quite proud. I'm also quite tired.

I shall reward myself with extra sleep.

Good night everybody, and good luck.

Query time!

So, having finished the bulk of my task of making the Tower!Guy novel a book that I hold my head up high about even as I wait for the rejection letters, I've turned my hand to query letters.

And you can guess where this is going. I need help, because, well, I'm dumb. And even though I've read a lot, there's probably something stupid I'm doing. I know a lot of you out there on the f-list are smarter/more experienced/better/an agent/a published writer/better at queries/[insert reason you're more qualified than me].

So, beneath the cut ( are my query letter, which probably needs intense picking apart, and the concerns I have about it. )

The floor is open to anyone, and I mean anyone with an opinion or advice or anything that might be remotely helpful. I am wide open and willing to learn and listen.