megwrites: A pair of brown glasses on a worn wooden table with a shadowed white wall in the background. (glasses)
1. I need a beta-reader/critique partner or two (or three) for the novel I've finished revising. It isn't anything I've shown to anyone yet (besides my husband, which makes me question if letting your partner/spouse critique your manuscripts is strictly healthy for one's marriage).

It is in the 120,000 word neighborhood, it is adult fantasy. Not sure what subgenre of fantasy I'd stick it in. There's people with wings, a really big city, smart ass sorcerers, and an evil forest with trees that eat people. So, yeah. I'm willing to return the favor if possible.

Also, I need at least one person who is really savvy with gender neutral pronouns in English, as they get used frequently in this book because there are a lot of non-binary characters and the world they're in recognizes and commonly uses gender neutral pronouns, but I need to make sure that I did my research right and that I'm using them the way I hope I'm using them (that is to say: in a good way that will make sense to readers).

If these critiques could be on the faster side, that would also be good.


2. We're moving! The Hubs (my socially approved heterosexual life partner) has gotten a new job in Charlotte, North Carolina. We don't know where exactly in the city we're going to be living, but we do know we'll be there by July because he starts work on July 11th.

Which is great, but it also means that I don't know ANYONE in Charlotte, NC. So if anyone knows of any geeky folks or SF/F writer's groups or social justice type writing people that are down there, that'd be great. Because I really would like to, yanno, have friends. Maybe people to hang with.

But this also means we need to cover moving expenses and initial expenses because the new job is paying for exactly squat when it comes to moving and I'm going to be unemployed until I find something down there and going from NYC to North Carolina is a bit of a haul. And it costs money. A lot of money.*

So right now, given that I am once more unemployed, I am considering doing one of two things:

a) Singing (or writing) for my supper by taking requests for short fiction or putting the above novel that needs critiquing out there and seeing if anyone wants to contribute to the tip jar on the model AND/OR b) Selling off some books and blank journals that I've got.

So thoughts, opinions, and suggestions on that would be wonderful!





*FYI - This is why I get really, really pissy when anyone says "just move, go somewhere else if its so bad in your neighborhood/city/state!" when others try to talk about how poor resources, lack of jobs, cost-of-living, etc affect them where they live. It isn't just as simple as pulling up stakes and going somewhere. Unless you fancy leaving all your worldly possessions behind and sleeping on the first street you can find, you need resources to both leave the place you're at and to get established in the place you're going. Which requires a fair amount of privilege, both economic and otherwise.
megwrites: Reading girl by Renoir.  (Default)
No more being Miss Lazypants for me. I've done the post-novel wallow, and frankly, I'm done with it. Ill-advised sugary snacks have been had, naps taken, interwebs surfed. Time to move to the next stage.

The Tower!Guy story is now resting in the most capable of hands, where it belongs.

However, I would like to have maybe another reader (or more!) for the Tower!Guy novel, but I'm not sure that anyone I know has the free time right now. And, asking someone to read your crappy novel is sort of a big favor to ask. I think most people would just rather help you move a body.

That being said, I'm asking. I am, of course, more than willing to return the favor now or at a later date, anything from short stories to door stopper novels. If that's not your currency, other rewards are to be had, in addition to my undying gratitude.

All I'd really want is for someone to sit down with the novel and tell me how it looks to you, a reader. What works, what doesn't, what floats your boat, what sinks you like the Titanic. Grammar, spelling, and other mechanics need not be nitpicked unless that's your thing.

Also? No time pressure. I mean, hopefully by the end of the year you'd have gotten back to me, but I'm not desperate for it to be done five minutes ago.

I'd also understand if real life got hectic and you had to tap out at any time. No offense taken, no grudges held. And I'd still owe you that favor.

Okay, so there's my plea. No guilt tripping if you can't take me up on it. I understand that right now is not a good time for a lot of people on my f-list, for various reasons.

But maybe if you could? It would be unbelievably awesome of you.

[/begging].

Off to outline the next project and get a-crackin' on it. Like the old proverb goes: "Before Enlightenment, chop wood, carry water. After Enlightenment, chop wood, carry water."
megwrites: Reading girl by Renoir.  (Default)
1. I need about two or three trusty people to read over my novel and give me comments. Sort of like a beta-read. I realize this is a big thing to ask, and I realize that people have lives. But I would really appreciate it. I'm not looking for anything fancy. I'm just looking for someone who can read it and tell me where things are boring or slow or don't make sense and the like.

In essence, I just need to see this thing from the reader's eyes - and I can't think of any other way besides just asking a couple of people to be readers and tell me what they see.

If anyone else has a better suggestion, let me know. But I do need someone else to look at the novel and tell me what's going on. Because being the writer, I have big honkin' blindspots.


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